compression of expression flowing in a singular theme and perfectly wrapped ... wonderful imagery and associative meanings and sibilant echoes.
light breaks focus darkness confounds and eats the answers
You manage to collect a distillation of that sense of confusion and questioning suspicions and distractions that apply to several situations ... ADD, shaking trust in a fragmenting love affair, migraine effects, the jitter and dance of closed eye kisses. All within the confines of a structured 4-4-4-5 single stanza frame-work.
I can find so need of suggestion of 'improvement' to this work (as though i'm pompous enough to do so in the first place); so no constructive criticism to offer, and though i left the first two lines off from your work in my quotation that is simply to avoid quoting the entire piece and to magnify the build to your culmination.
The duality of your artistry, visual and written amazes me. You manage to collect such moving bits of your life and present them so beautifully. Thank you for posting your portfolio here; i've loved every bit of it.